25-2-2013 MONDAY

Today we are going to change our draft with other party.My group change our draft with twins group.

The reason Miss Zu ask we change our draft is to make a comment or correct other draft.When we comment other draft in a same time we realize our mistake.This solution really help us to make a good essay.After finish commenting we need to re ado again our draft based on the comment that twins have given.To make a good essay you must go through many obstacle.If you tired have a rest but not take to much rest.Aja..Aja..Fighting.